Well done. I suggest breaking the text into smaller paragraphs - makes for easier reading. Do we get the revenge story?
Makes me wet just thinking about what I'm going to do to you !!!!!
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Well done. I suggest breaking the text into smaller paragraphs - makes for easier reading. Do we get the revenge story?
Yes do we get the REVENGE
Makes me wet just thinking about what I'm going to do to you !!!!!
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