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A Long Day Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by FA_JF10/03/13

I'm conflicted

Obviously a committed caring couple, but... messing with some one's workplace (by her comment, not a very flexible one) and sheesh... distracted driving much? To tell her to 'be safe' is rather ridiculous. Having bitched about content, I will say you have a good, solid writing style. :)

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by Masterfuljim10/03/13

Agree with fA

Great writing style, but a little more realism please.

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by redlion7510/04/13

how would have looked to the dos or cps if she had killed herself or someone else while driving that way?

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by Anonymous03/09/14

I sincerely loved it. Please continue the series :(

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by Anonymous04/23/14

great commands

I imagined the eggs inside of me also .

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