All Comments on 'Peep show'

by LesseloovesPeter

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Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years ago
Ahhh, naughty Lesse

Good sexy fun, nicely done

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
An exhibitionist,

Lesse ? 5-ed , but should'nt it be " her body's going taut " instead of "taught" !

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years agoAuthor
you're right, Ashesh

Guess I just got taught.

tazz317tazz317over 10 years ago
MAKES NO SENSE TO PEEP

when a full frontal vision is available, TK U MLJ LV NV

todski28todski28over 10 years ago
I made that same mistake

in a earlier piece I wrote :-p

awesome *flash* there lesse :-D

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Perfect

Perfect word selection.

Perfect cadence.

Perfect image.

Just perfect.

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