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by Anonymous

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by Oldbear6309/30/13

Ahhh, naughty Lesse

Good sexy fun, nicely done

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by Ashesh909/30/13

An exhibitionist,

Lesse ? 5-ed , but should'nt it be " her body's going taut " instead of "taught" !

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by LesseloovesPeter09/30/13

you're right, Ashesh

Guess I just got taught.

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by tazz31709/30/13

MAKES NO SENSE TO PEEP

when a full frontal vision is available, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by todski2810/01/13

I made that same mistake

in a earlier piece I wrote :-p

awesome *flash* there lesse :-D

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by Anonymous10/21/13

Perfect

Perfect word selection.
Perfect cadence.
Perfect image.
Just perfect.

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