I don't think walterio is using a proofreader or editor. Spelling and grammar stink. Sex is barely ok but he did start at the bottom of the scale, I think. The explanation of the rating system was really confusing. I thought from the initial statement that #14 would be the most exciting, because that's what he said but obvioiusly, he meant the complete opposite. We shall see if this improves.
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I don't think walterio is using a proofreader or editor. Spelling and grammar stink. Sex is barely ok but he did start at the bottom of the scale, I think. The explanation of the rating system was really confusing. I thought from the initial statement that #14 would be the most exciting, because that's what he said but obvioiusly, he meant the complete opposite. We shall see if this improves.
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