Great story, really getting into it.
But still needs editing to get rid of typos or spelling problems. Still, you are getting there.
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Great story, really getting into it.
Getting there...
But still needs editing to get rid of typos or spelling problems. Still, you are getting there.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Ms. Laura Ch. 03 or
More submissions by M777A2.