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by Masterfuljim10/04/13

Nice start

Welcome and I look forward to part two

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by Anonymous10/04/13

Ok...

But kinda sad. Hopefully they get rescued (especially since you mentioned that they had people who would notice/care about their disappearance) or at the very least, reunited.

But it does seem like a good start so far.

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by jleetechie10/05/13

potential

Potential is the best I can say at this point. Good writer, but a short segment, so who knows. Keep it going for sure.

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