You told the same story and only changed the names. What's up with that?6
I like it, but don't end them at the same location. overlap them like bricks....
Did anonymous not realize the title of the story explains the similarities. Its from their diffrent perspectives.
Great beginning; you need to finish the story or at least add another chapter!!!!
Great start liked how you did two perspectives, but where's the next chapters.
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You told the same story and only changed the names. What's up with that?6
not bad
I like it, but don't end them at the same location. overlap them like bricks....
ah duh anonymous
Did anonymous not realize the title of the story explains the similarities. Its from their diffrent perspectives.
Finish the story
Great beginning; you need to finish the story or at least add another chapter!!!!
What's next???
Great start liked how you did two perspectives, but where's the next chapters.
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