Butterfly Spirits

Halloween, down-under style

No other place celebrates Halloween like the US. It's interesting to learn how other countries deal with it.

A good story with some romance and eroticism thrown in. Good luck in the contest.

very nice!

I love seeing him embrace what others might see as her less-than-perfect body. So many women struggle with issues of self-image. It's lovely for him to embrace her as she is.

a very sweet story

A very sweet story, true love goes beyond the physical, it's seeing the flaws in someone and loving them BECAUSE of the flaws not inspite of them. Touching and we'll written. Good luck in the contest.

This was a lovely story about love, traditions and remembrance.

Made me bawl

Your story made me bawling my eyes out, it should come with a 'Have tissue box at hand!' warning. I really only have two complaints, my usual too short, and my other all too frequently voiced get a dictionary! brought about by the use of feint when it should have been faint. Although it would be nice if you could go back and redo the opening to make it clearer as I thought it was repeating there for a bit. Still, it was a lovely story and one I will be rereading often. Thank you for the gift of it.

really loved it

Keep writing.
Moved me. I've lost 2 dear friends to cancer this year. Nearly lost my eldest sister 3 years ago. Mom and dad are gone now too, via cancer.
Love is good.

loving

powerful

human

Strange story

And a sad one. Cancer is devastating. Both of them made mistakes that caused pain and lost time. I hope they can be happy together now.