Shy you are a devilish creature with a delightfully wicked mind. Write more, any subject please need to just read you and read you. this is a good two part series that might enjoy a third part! thanks
Both stories were good but there are some spelling errors especially in the second story, you also mistakenly called Paul by the name Joe at one point. Beyond that they well written. Keep up the good work. Thanks
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Anonymous02/15/16
Finish it!
Ok I know that at this point it's been over 2 years, but you have to finish this story please! I'm dying to know what happens next!
Why do so many authors give their character gets similar names ?
Of all the names there are, why did you give the female characters similar names here ? Sally and Sarah, oh please ! Following a story is often difficult when authors do this. Please, use very different names, it makes it so much easier to follow.
English
DAMN!
Thanks that was one hot story .Very good job hope you write more SOON.
Good.
But needs an editor. Some words and spelling are off.
Keep going
This has been great so far, can't wait for the continuation!
So sucking fucking hot
Moreand more please and soon
Keep going
Excellent story. More please.
Depraved
And extremely erotic.
So hot shy, What victorian smut did that come from..
keep it coming
5 stars from here
wilbur
Continue
So hot, Continue plz! Need to hear more, 3some maybe?
this turns me on like nothing else, im desperate for other stories with the same flavor. Doesnt have to be incest
Will bring you more soon.
A threesome seems inevitable!!!
yup - ready when ever you are to continue
quality over quantity I always say
I can see, what's it called? - come kind of menage in Paul's future
Please finish
Don't keep us hanging, you need to finish this. Love your stories.
Devil
Shy you are a devilish creature with a delightfully wicked mind. Write more, any subject please need to just read you and read you. this is a good two part series that might enjoy a third part! thanks
More pwease
please write more
I need to know what happens next
Nice!!!
Sad too see, though, that this one seems to be dicontinued...
Editing
Both stories were good but there are some spelling errors especially in the second story, you also mistakenly called Paul by the name Joe at one point. Beyond that they well written. Keep up the good work. Thanks
Finish it!
Ok I know that at this point it's been over 2 years, but you have to finish this story please! I'm dying to know what happens next!
MORE!!!
It be nice to see where this is going to go!!
More Please
No chapter 3 or 4? I'd love to know, does he get to taste forbidden love with his sister. Hmm?
Why do so many authors give their character gets similar names ?
Of all the names there are, why did you give the female characters similar names here ? Sally and Sarah, oh please ! Following a story is often difficult when authors do this. Please, use very different names, it makes it so much easier to follow.
Thanks !
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