This is disgusting abuse. These master/slave stories are beginning to be just an excuse to describe horrible abuse and evil punishment. There is nothing erotic here, its just a big turn off.
Notice that it's only Chapter 1. Sorry you didn't like it, can't please everyone ey?
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Anonymous10/08/13
Hang In There!
You told your story in the way you wanted. If some people didn't like it, there's no need for you to apologize for it! I thought it had a powerful erotic theme and was written in a highly readable style. Liked both this story and your other recent literotica tale - keep up the good work! Looking forward to more of the same in the future!
Hi, byGasMaskSlaveGirl, and thank you for writing and posting this story. While BDSM is my favourite category I can't say I was blown away with this particular story - but that is only my opinion - and that of your detractors is no more important than mine.
You should never apologise for your work - if some people don't like it, that's fine; others will. You simply CANNOT please everyone - trying to is the certain way to disappointment and failure - keep writing and ignore the bad comments!
This came into the category of mindless abuse to me, and did nothing to rev my engine.
It was however well written, and that as an author should be one of your primary aims.
The subject matter and the way the story unfolds is for you to deliver.
As has been said....you can't please us all
PS ...I personally HATE face slapping, but that is peculiar to me and probably explains why it didn't gel.
My cup of tea with Master tends to be extremely brutal, I didnt realize how brutal until the comments I've read. I thought I was a pretty typical sub, ah well!
Each to their own as they say. Whatever you are comfortable with.
You would probably be bored stiff with me after 10 minutes and I would be frightened to death with you.
FA made the best comments after your second post and articulated what I miserably failed at.
Keep going as you really do write well, but maybe a brief warning at the start.
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Only deserves 1*
This is disgusting abuse. These master/slave stories are beginning to be just an excuse to describe horrible abuse and evil punishment. There is nothing erotic here, its just a big turn off.
It's Not For The Light Hearted
Notice that it's only Chapter 1. Sorry you didn't like it, can't please everyone ey?
Hang In There!
You told your story in the way you wanted. If some people didn't like it, there's no need for you to apologize for it! I thought it had a powerful erotic theme and was written in a highly readable style. Liked both this story and your other recent literotica tale - keep up the good work! Looking forward to more of the same in the future!
Don't apologise for your work!
Hi, byGasMaskSlaveGirl, and thank you for writing and posting this story. While BDSM is my favourite category I can't say I was blown away with this particular story - but that is only my opinion - and that of your detractors is no more important than mine.
You should never apologise for your work - if some people don't like it, that's fine; others will. You simply CANNOT please everyone - trying to is the certain way to disappointment and failure - keep writing and ignore the bad comments!
Agree with Mel
This came into the category of mindless abuse to me, and did nothing to rev my engine.
It was however well written, and that as an author should be one of your primary aims.
The subject matter and the way the story unfolds is for you to deliver.
As has been said....you can't please us all
PS ...I personally HATE face slapping, but that is peculiar to me and probably explains why it didn't gel.
Thanks for the comments
My cup of tea with Master tends to be extremely brutal, I didnt realize how brutal until the comments I've read. I thought I was a pretty typical sub, ah well!
LOL GMSG
Each to their own as they say. Whatever you are comfortable with.
You would probably be bored stiff with me after 10 minutes and I would be frightened to death with you.
FA made the best comments after your second post and articulated what I miserably failed at.
Keep going as you really do write well, but maybe a brief warning at the start.
Why gosh, masterfuljim...
I blush. But as they say, children don't try this at home. I am a professional on a closed track. ;) :D :D :D
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