Good start...but there should be more character and background develop. Chapters could be longer though. Good but really couldn't give it a 5 because of length and lack of development. Look forward to the coming chapters.
decent read. Longer chapters and better character development and I'll change my vote to a 5
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Anonymous10/06/13
I agree
It's a decent read. This story has the making of a good series. But it can use longer chapters and better character development.
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Anonymous10/06/13
just a little prod
Good start where is the rest of the story
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Anonymous10/06/13
like all the others said
no background on their relationship. no character development. a weak plot. no incest in the incest area. and way to short this should be two or better yet three times longer then it may qualify for the incest area and be worth reading.
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good start....
Good start...but there should be more character and background develop. Chapters could be longer though. Good but really couldn't give it a 5 because of length and lack of development. Look forward to the coming chapters.
not bad
decent read. Longer chapters and better character development and I'll change my vote to a 5
I agree
It's a decent read. This story has the making of a good series. But it can use longer chapters and better character development.
just a little prod
Good start where is the rest of the story
like all the others said
no background on their relationship. no character development. a weak plot. no incest in the incest area. and way to short this should be two or better yet three times longer then it may qualify for the incest area and be worth reading.
A good start, but why so short?
The story needs some more character building, and perhaps a bonding between mom, son and daughter, or perhaps more background to bond the characters.
A good read, but it just seemed too short to really set the story in my mind.
Unless the chapters come very close together, the story could get lost in the maze of all the other stories posted on the web site.
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