A well written flash story. I like the teasing power play and I kinda wish the story was longer - I would love to learn more about the characters. Considering that this is the writers first submission it's obvious that he/she is talented. I'll be looking forward to reading future works.
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A well written flash story. I like the teasing power play and I kinda wish the story was longer - I would love to learn more about the characters.
Considering that this is the writers first submission it's obvious that he/she is talented. I'll be looking forward to reading future works.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to A Playful Bet With Daddy or
More submissions by Pompeii.