Had to stay up later each night till I finished the story. Highly erotic and enjoyable. Thank you. Can"t wait to read more or your work.
An inspired story. Certainly one of the best I've read. Every time I stopped I couldn't wait to get back.
By unimaginative halfwit !!!!
I really enjoyed reading these stories.
Awesome stories I hope with more to come (pun
By a mindless "writer" whom writes his own comments !!
Crunch it to 15 Chapters
I wonder if the people who made the negative comments read the whole series. If I don't like a story I go on to the next. Spending that much time and energy to read story you didn't like and then comment! That takes some serious determination.
(When I started reading this story I couldn't help hoping SiFi would be one of the catigories used)
For all you that complain about it being too long, you could see when you started that it had SIXTY chapters. There were parts that were not too thrilling for me, I just skimmed them. This long and hot story rates up right with my favorite. I loved it.
I enjoy long stories and found yours. I do prefer the stories to have more pages per chapter but can also understand how this might be easier for you. With Larry, Lynn, Mom and Dad taken care of for the future I sure hope you let us know what happens to the rest before you stop writing. I hate unfinished stories!
This entire story was great. Yes, it did have its slow parts and then it had some very great and detailed parts. It has been one of the best stories I have ever read. With that being said i do think that you could have shortened the length and combined pages, but all in all a wonderful story.
One of the worst on this here site!! By far.
And said it very well too. If you left the series for a reason important to you, then well and good; our loss, your gain. If you somehow are not sure if you are "in demand" then consider this as a years later confirmation. Whichever it is; Be Well.
Don't bother with the moaner! I just finished reading the 60th chapter and I have to say I think you are very brave to take on a story as long and, at times, detailed as this one has been . Over all very good and keep on writing William! :-)
This was one of the most boring and inept mind diarrhea I have ever encounter. Do people actually read all of this shit? Unbelievable!
Many an hour spent reading as I stroked to your characters. People I could relate to. Only near the end did you seem a bit rushed, enjoyed, but like more detail. Reading is like looking at porno photos, the more detail the better. Hope all is going well for you and that you can return to excite me once again.
I think that was a wonderful way to end the story. What happened to Carly and Jim though? Those are the only two unmentioned in the story ending.
Don't you know when to quit?
This was a really well written story with plenty of characters and lots of love.
This could be a novel by itself and keep your readers engrossed from start to finish.
I loved every minute and could relate to the characters.
I really enjoyed the whole story but I think that it needs to continue
Please come back and start writing again - you are one of the best ever!
I hope if you are not going to continue with this you write something along these line. This was the best story I have read up to this point on Lush. Great Work!!
Hey: Please continue with this story soon. Not sure that I will be able to live that long if it is more than a couple of months. I'm 81. Good shape, etc.
Enjoy the hell out of this story.
This is by far one of the best erotic stories I have ever read! Although, I am left wondering about Carly, Jim and Beth! I wonder if and when you will continue this story! Touching and poignant at times, this story was a well balanced blend of steamy sex and tender loving moments. So well written, I had to take a break every few chapters or so just to breathe. I was a little leery of such a long story based on incest, but it was written so masterfully that much of the time I forgot the sibling aspect. Well done! I can only hope to read more of your story someday! I hope that the long hiatus is not due to first of all, uncertainty of reception of the story. If so, please know this: many people have probably read and loved this story, whether or not they voted or commented. Secondly, I hope the hiatus is not due to any health problems or serious life issues. If so, I wish you good luck, health and best wishes.
You are an absolutely talented writer! I know you can succeed in an space you choose but please do so after you continue this story.
Congratulations to the author, this is one of the best sex-stories I ever read (being 56 now I've read a lot of them since I was 16...). This author is able to provide the reader with developing characters, a good and believable storyline, good conversations, and hot sex. Many sex-stories miss out on those aspects.
Astonishingly the sex stays quite ordinary, apart from the incest-aspect, but is still very hot. I would have added more bisexual intercourse between the boys, MFM-trio's and anal. There was ample opportunity, but it didn't happen and I hardly missed it. It's a compliment to the autor's imagination that he didn't need writing about harder and harder sex.
So, it's simple: I LOVED THIS!
(How sexually frustrated must someone be to give a series of negative comments on this excellent work? Poor man! I can only feel pity for someone like that.)
So well written and engaging right from the start. Character development didn't get in the way of wonderfully described sex, and it was so enjoyable to keep reading of their continuing adventures with one another. Forbidden loving was made appealing and so very erotic, I had to space out my reading to allow myself the releases so demanded by reading your story. Well written and crafted - I hope to read more of your work in the future, and will definitely re-visit this series regularly anyway. My thanks!
... but the four or five screen preface duplicated at the beginning of each chapter seriously detracts from the reading experience. I wonder how many people have abandoned the story because of it. Then there are the detractions of the Literotica interface, but they aren't anything you or I can impact.
== srgeek ==
No one could have done better looking forward to more fine work from you .Thanks for sharing your fine mind with us all.Your fan the old Powderman
The worst. Unmitigated 1* !
A fitting end to satisfy the unmet needs of two frustrated parents. Lynn and Larry giving their dad and mom, respectively, to each other rounds out the story quite nicely! All in all, the series has given me several throbbing boners! Great work!
This story was lovely. This day was not my best. Now, having read This, I have a smile on my face and a warm glow in my heart.
Thank you again.
The whole series has had me constantly wet and ready to finger myself.I literally have my hands in my panties right now.But,what would be even better is if the author would just come behind me and give me a helping hand.These stories are phenomenal.I wish sex was as great as it is in this series.Someone fuck me please!!!!
What an amazingly sexy tale. Enjoyed every bit of it. Just wish I had a family like that.
I have thoroughly enjoyed this series, which I managed to read in three days. As I look around the site I hope to find one equally as good!!
Took me a few days to finish the entire series, but I loved it. I kind of wish there was a little more male on male. Good writer looking forward to seeing more from you. Loved it.
I hope you are working on some kind of reunion/free-for-all if the story is going to continue someday, if not, then Well Done.
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