All Comments on 'A Almost Perfect Awakening Ch. 61'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
the best i ever read

from one to sixty read every word. the very best. you sound as you may have problems. Hope you solve them and that you will continus with your great stories

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
I loved every word

I've never cum so many times in 2 days ever in my life, your words are like magic pulling me into the story. Thank You

hongluobohongluoboabout 20 years ago
every word

thank you so much..... i have really screwed up my R/L in the office by reading your story from beginning to end over a couple of days... and thank you .... one of the most beautiful and believable stories i have read on Lit, I do hope that your work won't keep you from writing again too much longer for purely my own selfish reasons. A loving delight... now whatever happens to Carly and Beth and Jimmy?? ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Oh. My. God!

You sir, are an erotica God.

You do Kinky beyond Kink, Loving beyond Love and you do it well.

Thank You

Whew

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Great!

You are a wonderful writer and I hope you continue to write. Your stories are erotic and captivating and they continue to turn me on. Good Job! And keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
By far the best

Wow wow and more wow's. Excellent, incredibly hot writing that I will be reading and rereading for as long as it stays available. I think I will print it....

Thank you for such a wonderfully erotic and sensual story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Fantastic!

Your story is the best ever written. Every coupling is a very erotic, entirely new experience. The story is intelligent with good sentence structure. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
A Almost Perfect Awakening All Chapters

With r/l stuff it has taken me a bit of time to read this "book"...Thank You so much for leaving your fans with a actual ending persay instead of hanging like so many of the stories do, Wonderfully written,erotic and oh so sensual...I will continue to read on the rest of your submissions and would love to see you open up into some real bdsm writing if that at all interests you...so many stories in bdsm is left with a unfinished ending and it gets rather flustering. I look forward to reading on as well as searching some new stuff...if you ever publish please post to your bio so us, your fans, can purchase your art...love it love love it...a fan in Texas

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Excellent

For a change, Incest dealt with in a heart-warming manner. Romance, sex, and erotica in a two family setting. Well worth the time to read it.

Stryder

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Nice Very Nice!!

I have read all of your chapters and I must say that they have turned me on more that anyother. Incest never really turned me on but now i wish i had a brother!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
romantic, and adventurous[good stuff].

This whole story, from first to last, was extraordinarily well written. I enjoyed it greatly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
mazing Writer

You, good sir are an amazing writer. i've read all the chapters and i was very impressed i'm also vey glad that u didn't leave me hanging with the lynn-larry situation, i was beginning to wonder if they'd ever tie the knot. anyway, once again, ur story was awesome

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Perfection

Without a doubt you have a unique talent and until you walk

this way again - THANK YOU!

David48David48over 18 years ago
Done and out

Took me a couple of days, but the deed is done. All in all alot of goddamn fun! 17(?) catagories of every kind of sex imaginable. Just amazing. Sixty-one chapters, of hot, wet, sweatin', humping, uninhibited debauchery, ending finally with the only emotion that really matters...love. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
WOW

Wow I must say I enjoyed reading every single chapter it took a while but I can't be any happier continue writing I can't wait to read more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Brilliant

That has to be the best story i've read on this site.

Hopefully your long break will be over soon, I can't wait to read what happens to the rest of the charectars and I'm sure neither can many others.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
WOW

That was a brilliant effort keep it up if you can otherwise also thanks for the whole lot you have given.

It would be nice if you can pick up th story say two years down the road and maybe expand the character list as the core group is now comfortable with each other so maybe some unwary new characters can be surprised and added.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
You've heard it before.

Dear Wm

I have read and re read your work. I am amazed at your ability to write the way I love to read. The way my minds eye pictures your illiterations. It took me a few days to read and a few more to re read which means you slayed over this work. I feel full and know you must be exhausted.

I devoured your work to the fullest and understand if you don't work on this any more. But if you do I want to enjoy the read as much as this time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
WOW!!!!!!!!

What a saga. I truly enjoy your writng style. In addition to great sexual descriptions, there is a great deal of loving emotion. I enjoy that. I really enjoy the incest stories and I don't really understand why. I grew up with three beautiful, younger sisters and have two beautiful daughters and have never had a conscise[sp] incestuos thought. I don't think it totally wrong as long as it is consentual and handled properly. At any rate I really enjoyed your story. Thanks and I will read more. I am clicking on anonymous because I can't get it to go using my

email and password-sorry.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
can't wait

I can't wait to see if you contiue your saga.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Boo Hoo

Can't wait for more. Great writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
WOW!!

I read all 61 chapters and I must say FABULOUS and BRILLANT!! I was just so into the story that I felt like I was there...Excellent writing and the whole story just flowed and it was a very sexy storyline....Can't wait to read more of your work!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
WOW

With out doubt the best series I have ever read. Great work developing the characters and great insight into how the woman feels. Amazing work, thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Phew

This was a superb read - even the chapters that were not by scene held me interested.

Any hope of a further 61 chapters?

Congratulations on a very explicit but well written yarn. I only wish that I could have held as many productive erections in a day as these guys did!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
AWAITING ... MORE!!!

I can only wish that I could put into words, the thoughts and feelings, that you have put into your writings. If you are bored with the story, get your head out of your ass and write more anyway.

I have never read such a wonderful story with all the love, need, desire and feeling of REAL country life before, so "PLEASE" keep up the "GREAT" work and let us have several more chapters! You are an EXCEPTIONAL Writer!!!

DAN

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Horny old bastard loves your story

Great story. Want to see the movie when it cums out I had a woody most of the two days it took me to read it. Thats a big deal because I'm 74 years old. Thanks for all the work you did writing it. All us perv's are grateful for your erotic mind.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
A MUST READ

This CAN'T be the end. I impatiently wait with baited breath (and throbbing cock!) for the next installment. This is the best "novel" I have ever read! Talk about a "page-turner"! I've found a new favorite author! You obviously have a talent for writing, and if you ever had any doubts, let them end here. Not only was this the sexiest thing I've ever read, it was also funny, mildly suspenseful, and extremely well told. With the help of a good proofreader (for grammar and spelling ONLY), you could, I'm positively sure, become a best selling writer in any genre in which you choose to enter. Tom Clancy and John Grisham look out! You've got some serious competition coming I fear. (Hell, even the dialogue was good!)

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
So glad I took the time to read all the chapters

I've been reading stories from this website for a few years now, saw various chapters of this story in several categories but I never got around to reading it because I knew I'd want to read it all and that seemed far too complicated and time consuming. I am so glad that I finally gave in and gave it a chance! After 4 years I'm guessing that this story is not getting any new chapters, that's too bad but I loved every single chapter. Thank you for sharing it with us! ~ daisy

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
omg

omg dude your story rocked i came so many time over this story ive read all the chaptors and this is the best story ive ever read

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
pretty hot...

Having read all the chapters, this was the hottest story I've ever read. However, I feel like there is more to be told. Is there? Do we get to see what happens to Jimmy, Beth, and Carly? What about the blossoming relationship between Betty and Wayne? And, what of the "small-town gossip mill"; any ideas as to maybe getting a chapter in about someone seeing something or hearing something involving one or more of the characters? I have to say also that the main relationship between Larry and Lynn while very sexual, was also very touching too. I like that they are engaged to be married. Perhaps there could be some other "encounters" at the wedding? Anyway, good story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
totally amazing

Not sure why I was drawn to your text as I'm not into incest etc - but it was just so mind blowingly amazing. I just couldn't stop reading - it was so orgasmic. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
My god

I came ALOT to this fantastic novel. Superb.

I hope there will be more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
impressed and aroused

Dear Wm,

This is a fabulous story.Complex plot and characters, hot sex and lots of naughty. Goodness gracious! What an epic. I will check out your other work etc but thanks for a moist and sleepless night! I simply could not stop reading it. THanks for the effort and the tremendous quality of your story. I am in your debt. Please keep up the good work. I am now a huge fan.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Oh my word!

Oh my word!! I have not been able to concentrait on anything but your stories since i found them, i have never been so much aroused from just reading! Oh! Thank you very much!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
AMAZING STORY

First off, let me just say that this was an amazing story and I have read the full version three times. Am curious as to whether this story is based on true events. And, as the other commenters have said... AWAITING MORE.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
I would have reread this but...

Hi,

<P>

I would have reread this but, I still remember too much about what happens next. I'll wait a while longer and come back again.

<P>

As a positive statement, what more can I say?

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<I>-- srgeek --</I>

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Truly amazing

A truly amazing story

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
great. just great

I read through this in about a month, and, I've gotta say, it was really good. I've been looking for something this long and with such quality after this, but to no avail. There were even parts where the emotional connections made me squirm. Although the ending was pretty predictable (from Wayne on), it made for an amazing novel altogether.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
amazing work!

i've read the entire series in a about two weeks. this is amazing work. the detail and use of imagery is wonderful. this is the most fun i've had reading in years.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
loved it

I have read this story too many times to count, and i still have amazing reactions to it. Love it, and by far one of the best stories ever.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Holy WOW!

I'm an avid reader of every thing i can get my hands on but it's been many many years since any genera held me so captivated as this did, i finished this thing in under 3 hours and have visited it again 11 times in the last 2 week.

The details are amazingly vivid, your characters are well developed with very lovable personality's, your story line is while maybe a little unlikely still very very believable.

You sir are a fantastic writer and if the rest of your works are as amazing as this one have very very bright future ahead of you, i would easily pay full book price for this work!

in short

[I really love this story.] Yeah, me to brain.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
wow

i have read this whole story over the past month and loved it! it made me come harder than ever before

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
WOW i really loved this

I once thought that the incest thing was just that but now i have a newfound understanding of how it all works. I have read all of your chapters from 1 -61 and thoroughly enjoyed evey word of it. Keep up the good work I love your writings. When will you be adding to this wonderful adventure?

faithful101faithful101almost 14 years ago
Thank you!

Thank you for writing this story! I have done little else during the past 4 or 5 days other than reading it. Although clearly written to emphasize sexual situations, this story also describes people with just enough realism to allow me to buy into it. The last few chapters even created a satisfying ending, and I finished the story feeling happy and satisfied about the fates of all characters.

I see that all your stories were written eight years ago in 2002. I take that to mean that you experienced a life change at the end of this rather intense writing period so that now you are putting your creativity to use in some other way. I respect this decision, but I also want to indicate that if you should elect to return to writing erotica for this web site, there will probably be a whole lot of people besides just me who will be very happy to read it! In any case, I feel fortunate to have experienced much of the product during your Literotica phase, and I thank you for making it possible!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
plz dont stop

plz dont stop making these they r awsome

GreenleafRGreenleafRover 13 years ago
Thank you

You did it. You wrote a well integrated story that hit practically every popular category and kept me going as quickly as I could move through the stories. Oh, and I'm hot as hell! Great characters, nice development, almost believable plots and I'd love to have my wife and I pulled into these kinds of sexual circumstances by the girls and the guys and Dad and Mom. Thanks again for putting together such a great series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
AWESOME

PLEASE DO NOT STOP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
omfg so good

such a great hot storie i read everyone

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
This is the best story I've ever read.

And I've read a lot of great stories. I agree, don't stop, it's too good. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
You made my weekend!

Read all of it and loved it. Can't wait to read more of your work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Excellent reading

Had to stay up later each night till I finished the story. Highly erotic and enjoyable. Thank you. Can"t wait to read more or your work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

An inspired story. Certainly one of the best I've read. Every time I stopped I couldn't wait to get back.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Nothing but mindless self serving crap---

By unimaginative halfwit !!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Great story

I really enjoyed reading these stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Great

Awesome stories I hope with more to come (pun

intended).

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
What a shit of a "story"---

By a mindless "writer" whom writes his own comments !!

wanuspwanuspalmost 13 years ago
To Long.To repetitive

Crunch it to 15 Chapters

BoundlifeBoundlifealmost 13 years ago
negative comments

I wonder if the people who made the negative comments read the whole series. If I don't like a story I go on to the next. Spending that much time and energy to read story you didn't like and then comment! That takes some serious determination.

(When I started reading this story I couldn't help hoping SiFi would be one of the catigories used)

BfreetorunBfreetorunalmost 13 years ago
This was a great saga and I really enjoyed it.

For all you that complain about it being too long, you could see when you started that it had SIXTY chapters. There were parts that were not too thrilling for me, I just skimmed them. This long and hot story rates up right with my favorite. I loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Please keep writing

I enjoy long stories and found yours. I do prefer the stories to have more pages per chapter but can also understand how this might be easier for you. With Larry, Lynn, Mom and Dad taken care of for the future I sure hope you let us know what happens to the rest before you stop writing. I hate unfinished stories!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

This entire story was great. Yes, it did have its slow parts and then it had some very great and detailed parts. It has been one of the best stories I have ever read. With that being said i do think that you could have shortened the length and combined pages, but all in all a wonderful story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
A pile of feeble-minded and inept shit of a writ !!

One of the worst on this here site!! By far.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
FAITHFUL 101 SAID MY MESSAGE!

And said it very well too. If you left the series for a reason important to you, then well and good; our loss, your gain. If you somehow are not sure if you are "in demand" then consider this as a years later confirmation. Whichever it is; Be Well.

Greg

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Brave

Don't bother with the moaner! I just finished reading the 60th chapter and I have to say I think you are very brave to take on a story as long and, at times, detailed as this one has been . Over all very good and keep on writing William! :-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Yeah,never mind the quality, its the length which counts.

This was one of the most boring and inept mind diarrhea I have ever encounter. Do people actually read all of this shit? Unbelievable!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
A Good Story

Many an hour spent reading as I stroked to your characters. People I could relate to. Only near the end did you seem a bit rushed, enjoyed, but like more detail. Reading is like looking at porno photos, the more detail the better. Hope all is going well for you and that you can return to excite me once again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Written by a faggot.

1 star.

lynxxielynxxieover 11 years ago
Wonderful

I think that was a wonderful way to end the story. What happened to Carly and Jim though? Those are the only two unmentioned in the story ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Stop already

Don't you know when to quit?

olderman66olderman66over 11 years ago
Another

This was a really well written story with plenty of characters and lots of love.

This could be a novel by itself and keep your readers engrossed from start to finish.

I loved every minute and could relate to the characters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Loved it

I really enjoyed the whole story but I think that it needs to continue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Where did this author go?

Please come back and start writing again - you are one of the best ever!

StratisfiedStratisfiedalmost 11 years ago
Great Stuff!!!

I hope if you are not going to continue with this you write something along these line. This was the best story I have read up to this point on Lush. Great Work!!

camr4656camr4656almost 11 years ago
Please continue - SOON!

Hey: Please continue with this story soon. Not sure that I will be able to live that long if it is more than a couple of months. I'm 81. Good shape, etc.

Enjoy the hell out of this story.

deepestfantasyforyoudeepestfantasyforyouover 10 years ago
amazing

This is by far one of the best erotic stories I have ever read! Although, I am left wondering about Carly, Jim and Beth! I wonder if and when you will continue this story! Touching and poignant at times, this story was a well balanced blend of steamy sex and tender loving moments. So well written, I had to take a break every few chapters or so just to breathe. I was a little leery of such a long story based on incest, but it was written so masterfully that much of the time I forgot the sibling aspect. Well done! I can only hope to read more of your story someday! I hope that the long hiatus is not due to first of all, uncertainty of reception of the story. If so, please know this: many people have probably read and loved this story, whether or not they voted or commented. Secondly, I hope the hiatus is not due to any health problems or serious life issues. If so, I wish you good luck, health and best wishes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
perfectly told story by an amazing artist!

You are an absolutely talented writer! I know you can succeed in an space you choose but please do so after you continue this story.

Dave_from_OzDave_from_Ozalmost 10 years ago
Thank you!

So well written and engaging right from the start. Character development didn't get in the way of wonderfully described sex, and it was so enjoyable to keep reading of their continuing adventures with one another. Forbidden loving was made appealing and so very erotic, I had to space out my reading to allow myself the releases so demanded by reading your story. Well written and crafted - I hope to read more of your work in the future, and will definitely re-visit this series regularly anyway. My thanks!

srgeeksrgeekalmost 10 years ago
Great Story...

... but the four or five screen preface duplicated at the beginning of each chapter seriously detracts from the reading experience. I wonder how many people have abandoned the story because of it. Then there are the detractions of the Literotica interface, but they aren't anything you or I can impact.

== srgeek ==

DYNO224DYNO224over 9 years ago
Congratulations

No one could have done better looking forward to more fine work from you .Thanks for sharing your fine mind with us all.Your fan the old Powderman

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
A heap of talentless garbage !

The worst. Unmitigated 1* !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Salacious!

A fitting end to satisfy the unmet needs of two frustrated parents. Lynn and Larry giving their dad and mom, respectively, to each other rounds out the story quite nicely! All in all, the series has given me several throbbing boners! Great work!

jcfinley1jcfinley1almost 9 years ago
Thank You.

This story was lovely. This day was not my best. Now, having read This, I have a smile on my face and a warm glow in my heart.

Thank you again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Damn!!

The whole series has had me constantly wet and ready to finger myself.I literally have my hands in my panties right now.But,what would be even better is if the author would just come behind me and give me a helping hand.These stories are phenomenal.I wish sex was as great as it is in this series.Someone fuck me please!!!!

dragonwelshukdragonwelshukalmost 8 years ago
Superb

What an amazingly sexy tale. Enjoyed every bit of it. Just wish I had a family like that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great Read!!

I have thoroughly enjoyed this series, which I managed to read in three days. As I look around the site I hope to find one equally as good!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good read

Took me a few days to finish the entire series, but I loved it. I kind of wish there was a little more male on male. Good writer looking forward to seeing more from you. Loved it.

smuuthiesmuuthiealmost 7 years ago
Great story

I hope you are working on some kind of reunion/free-for-all if the story is going to continue someday, if not, then Well Done.

LonesomesoulLonesomesoulalmost 7 years ago
Perfect!

What can I say - have made so many comments as I have traveled this adventure of love and incest (and More) with you and others. You have a masterful way of describing emotions and desires - like I have said before - it pulls me right into the story - often feeling as emotional as the characters in this story. You have handled this taboo subject of incest in a very loving and understandable way.

I googled your, probably pseudo, name to see if you have had any stories or books published - but could find none. So - now will continue to read your other stories found here. My thanks! "Lonesomesoul"

casualwearcasualwearover 5 years ago
A most erotic tale

Young love is certainly erotic, as I remember my first attempts to steal a kiss from the chubby girl down the street. I thought she was the very vision of beauty and sexy as hell! I never got that kiss because she was wanting someone who would slam her to the ground and bang away; not some wimp whining for a kiss. My first real love wasn't as robust as that first fat girl, but she certainly took what she wanted! This story brought back fond memories of young love and later trysts with my best friend's wife. The grammar and editing were a bit rough, but the story came through loud and clear and I had many orgasms at my own hand while reading it! Good job of conveying young love and carnal lust in the same story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
True

I was one of those people who was lucky enough to experience things like this when I was very young. Though people in our culture insist that this is harmful, I'm here to tell you that not only is it wonderful, it has helped me navigate the complicated issue of relationships throughout my life. We should pay much more attention to the needs of young people so we can understand their actions better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
KEEP GOING!!!!!

KEEP GOING PLEASE!!!!!!!

zmaybezmaybeabout 1 year ago

Awsome tale, wish it would go on, but it was a great read.

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