Small White Bones

Spooky with great imagery.

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descriptive and lovely. The last verse is a hauntingly beautiful punch. Enjoyed the read

The predatory Food Chain in

Verse : 5-ed . Thnx for sharin' .

Damn

Amazing imagery, and you create a tension build that is awesome

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Beautiful.. Thank you.

A very spooky seasonal kind of poem

Your usual careful attention to craft is excellent, especially at the end where you leave us with a literal impression. You have a great ability to link small details of observation to memory and imagination.

Frightening; felt it in my bones.

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Haunting beauty, especially 'and little still heart'