All Comments on 'Doctor's Prescription'

by AlanaAllyn

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techsan about 19 years ago

Well-told

Good story, well-told and, as with your other stories, demonstrates good use of language skills. I personally would have liked Allyn to take a more active role but that's just me. Maybe now that you've had your first sandwich, he will do just that.

A comment about the story description in the index. The description says "Two doctors, my man, and her." The "my" implies Alana, so there should be five people in this story, three men and two women. Right? No! I think it should read "Two doctors, my man, and me."

Techsan

blueslk almost 13 years ago

Where are the comments?

This is a general review of all 6 of the author's stories from 4.5 to 8 years ago. The tales are all very good, well written with more than decent character description. I don't understand why there are so few reviews. If you like one, you'll like them all and I encourage more stories

from the author.