All Comments on 'Pure Lust'

It's clear you have potential as a writer, but you need an interesting story about which to write. Think of one, then find a good editor to help as you write it. I only suggest this as you asked for feedback.

Five, for starters.

I was beginning to wonder what I had to do to get some feedback on here! Yeah, I write short stories so I know the plot is lacking, I kinda just wanted to try my hand at creating a sex scene since I don't normally write erotica lol. I do see where I csn take this as a series though and make it more interesting. Thanks again. - TC