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by mel_pomene10/08/13

Not at all bad ...

... especially as a first offering. I look forward to seeing where this one will go - but please watch the length of your paragraphs; they are in danger of rendering you story unreadable.

Welcome to Literotica, thank you for your story and please have three stars for it.

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by zeefee10/10/13

thank you!

thankyou for your input, let me know how you like the 02 part of it when it gets posted!

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