... especially as a first offering. I look forward to seeing where this one will go - but please watch the length of your paragraphs; they are in danger of rendering you story unreadable.
Welcome to Literotica, thank you for your story and please have three stars for it.
Not at all bad ...
... especially as a first offering. I look forward to seeing where this one will go - but please watch the length of your paragraphs; they are in danger of rendering you story unreadable.
Welcome to Literotica, thank you for your story and please have three stars for it.
thank you!
thankyou for your input, let me know how you like the 02 part of it when it gets posted!
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