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Au Pair

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/08/13

No sense. If she is being treated as a daughter, then why no STAY WITH HER FUCKING PARENTS?

Same city. Same fucking neighbours, same fucking university....so explain, if you have any small ability to do so, exactly why she would live with another family while attending school?

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by Ashson10/08/13

And where does it say that it's the same city, same neighbours, same university or even the same country?
I know people in other cities. I'm sure a lot of people do.

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by Anonymous10/10/13

seriously. what a stupid fucking question.

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by unicorn6410/24/13

Again with the leave the reader hanging. It is not finished. Please finish the story.

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by Anonymous02/19/14

Great story

Please finish this! Don't leave us hang! Great story by the way!

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by Anonymous04/17/14

finish the story?

Good story so will you be doing another part to it?

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by Anonymous03/14/15

yum

so who was it? more please

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by inneedofrelease03/20/15

Spoilt slightly

I really enjoyed this story but it was spoilt slightly by carelessness. Sometime Pamela became Peggy and the Chalmers became the Palmers etc. Makes it hard to follow. A little proof reading would sort it. Keep it up though please as I love your work.

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