Fantastic read. Please don't leave it so long before the next chapter.
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Anonymous10/09/13
Captivating
Your style is very erotic and such a turn on. The character development is very good even in this short story format. Please keep writing. Your writing is really a pleasure to read!
I had read the first story a couple of months ago and it didn't grab me at the time. Just the other day I reread it and then read part 2. Suddenly I was addicted. I started reading and became fascinated with the story. Very well written and entertaining. Especially love the relationship that grows between Gwen and Natalie. I think these stories personify what 95% of married men wish would happen to their wives. I've read the first ten and will continue to read the rest. Great work. Please keep it up.
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Fantastic read. Please don't leave it so long before the next chapter.
Captivating
Your style is very erotic and such a turn on. The character development is very good even in this short story format. Please keep writing. Your writing is really a pleasure to read!
great reading
you are giving me and my wife new ideas
inspirational
this story has lead me to work on a friend who is a "Glen" to change her attitude. Hopefully it will save her marriage.
Lovely story !
Hot!
Very, very, HOT!
Lovely
A great erotic story look foward to reading them all....
Gets better and better
I had read the first story a couple of months ago and it didn't grab me at the time. Just the other day I reread it and then read part 2. Suddenly I was addicted. I started reading and became fascinated with the story. Very well written and entertaining. Especially love the relationship that grows between Gwen and Natalie. I think these stories personify what 95% of married men wish would happen to their wives. I've read the first ten and will continue to read the rest. Great work. Please keep it up.
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