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Awake and Lost Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/07/13

Like the premise of the story

I hope we find out more about Erika & her relationship with Harper & see where this story goes?

So far I am intrigued!

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by sowerofash01/26/14

More please

Pretty please? This was excellently done.

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by Tarotb02/21/14

This was fantastic!

Please, please PLEASE continue this. Erica is a fantastic character; powerful and seductive, and her pursuit of the vulnerable Harper is very appealing.
I'd love to see how this develops, whether she breaks free of Riley and most important of all, hope Harper starts to return her feelings :)
Thanks!

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by ariesgirl04/28/14

Wow! I wonder if the roles were reversed and Harper sexually assaulted Erica would it be OK? Clearly Harper is scared, she doesn't care. Erica doesn't like what Riley does to her but yet she is starting to do some of the same things to Harper.

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by Anonymous06/07/14

This is Hot!

Can't wait to see what happens next!! :)

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