I haven't read many stories in this category but I have to say I liked yours a lot. The writing was easy to read, the flow was paced just right and the descriptions were well executed.
All in all a good read and I'll be looking forward to more of your stories.
One great story. One I hope to live in real life as soon as possible! If imitation is the best compliment, I hope to give you a Great compliment! Keep up the good work.
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Nicely done!
I haven't read many stories in this category but I have to say I liked yours a lot. The writing was easy to read, the flow was paced just right and the descriptions were well executed.
All in all a good read and I'll be looking forward to more of your stories.
Thanks for sharing and keep on writing.
IDB
Nicely done
Nice job Doc... You did a wonderful job describing everything. Thanks for sharing. :)
A goal to strive for!
One great story. One I hope to live in real life as soon as possible! If imitation is the best compliment, I hope to give you a Great compliment! Keep up the good work.
Keep up the good work!
I think you did a great job writing this story and hope you post more of your work. Well done Doc!
Well Done
This is a well written experience of anal experimentation between a loving couple. Thanks for sharing
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