Embrace the Darkness

nice job.

She wanted a good scare but he took her fear to the next level.

This is very nasty

To even suggest that he had killed her mother and raped her and then engage in canabalism. This has nothing to do with Halloween, this is just pschopathically sick.
Even said as a joke, anybody who hinted that they had killed my mother and would rape my sister, would earn my undying hatred and contempt.. 1-*

I really don't care about the nastyness of it all this is a very good story.I would love it if u continued this would be interesting to see how this all turns out

Not bad for a first submission

The premise (while not overly Halloween-y) is pretty good as Erotic Horror. You may want to be a little more careful about switching tenses, but all and all, enjoyable. :) Welcome to lit and looking forward to future submissions.

This is some sick and depraved material.

OMG !!!

Erotic Horror ! You took it to next level !!!
Scared but enjoyed it so much.....