Alex in Pornoland Ch. 01

A Promising Beginning...

...would have liked a bit more, though. The scene is nicely set up for what's to come, but this could have used some follow through.

In my defence...

I did say it's a short prologue with more to come!

Also the title contains a typo - it should be "Alex In Pornoland" and has been resubbed with the correction.

A bit of a tease

but a good start. Looking forward to see how this develops.

Thanks

Thanks, dellagordo - - I have plans for this series to go on so fingers crossed people will like the later chapters more than this little tease. Judging by the votes, readers want sex, god dammit!

The suspense

Can't wait! Exciting!

Please write more

Part 2 is done

And will be submitted in a week or two!

great

like how you kept at the suspience but try to have more sex are details like the doctor and nurse one.

Got me hooked...

Yep love it and your writing style and story flow. I'm hooked and I will be back for more. Thank you for writing this!

That aside I will say the man with the yellow eyes for me holds an interesting place in my imagination. I have another story that I am am writing (away from here atm) and there is a character with those eyes as well. I'm very interested in seeing where and when your main character and this yellow eyes will meet again

An interesting start. Can't wait to see what chapter 2 has in store for our hero.

Like the writing.

Keep up the good writing.

Keeping it simple, and straight forward.

(((thumbs up!!/or, in this case, a five)))