All Comments on 'Spring Break Detour'

"I was hanging with Steve, Frank and Bianca, and I got IDed going into a bar. I think Steve and Bruce would have passed on going in, but Sheila wanted to check out the bar..."

How did Frank become Bruce, and how did Bianca become Sheila? Sloppy editing on top of sloppy writing. Not very good at all.

There are some cougars that take advantage of spring break and other college events. The guys are easy and everyone gets what they want.

LOVE The story.

just a huge shame it was told from the SUBS view point instead of the DOMS view point. Still hit all my favored kinks, mostly older women dominating a younger male via Facesiting, LOVE that.

Hope you may write much more, and hopefully the next from the ladies viewpoint >;)

This sounds like heaven to me. I would very much love to hear what they do with him for another day.

Am still waiting for part 2. Great story.

gud story

Great story. Love the mature women using young guys, and especially love it when rimming and ass tongue fucking is involved!

Dude, write a sequel. Please! This story was great! Maybe the ladies pimp him out to other older ladies? Maybe there is some pegging later? Just do it! :)

That kind of encounter would be great. Three women who wanted a younger man to use and controlled. He would have great memories and they would have an experience of a lifetime.

Every young man who loves or loved an older woman would want to be this guy.