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by Oldbear6310/09/13

Unnerved me!

Normally I would recoil from something like this. But this one is beautiful, very sad, but maybe not so sad? This one will stay with me for a while.

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by LesseloovesPeter10/09/13

a thinker...

Simple yet elegant and deep.

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by todski2810/10/13

You

Always deliver I'm depth, simple elegant the space between the stanzas leaving you room for the mind to fill in and process the story, another awesome piece.

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by KittehSoftPaws10/10/13

(=^_^=)

I guess when you have so much to say, and just cant find the right words... the only thing left to do is to 5-star.

Beautiful poem.

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by Ashesh910/10/13

Kill

Bill : part 3

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