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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/12/13

Delicious...as pumpkin pie!!

Light and easy...well-paced and NO coercion....I am sure BOTH ladies will be back and will pretend not to care if Peter is a judge or not!! LOL

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by sopharoones10/12/13

i want some pie!

thats was ok, agree with prev comment: nice "light" erotica. I was sorta hoping you'd play on the small town atmosphere a bit, coulda made it funny even as it got hot and heavy. Chapter 2??

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