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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/13/13

It is a very good and well written story . However it is a copy and paste from one of the other authors that post here.

I have read this story several times from other authors . I like that it has made a come-back.

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by rd7500010/13/13

It is an original story

Hi Anonymous. Thanks for reading the story and glad you liked it. Just want to say that it is an original piece of writing and that I've been working on it for a while.

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by Anonymous10/13/13

Very revealing!

Well done... Only thing I could add was that e pacing seemed a bit off at times. However, I enjoyed Nikki coming into her own as Gypsy. I hope we get to follow her as she takes on the new role.

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by Anonymous10/13/13

One of the best exhibitionist stories I have read. Very believable. I can imagine myself approaching the role in a similar manner.
Also pleased to note that it didn't need to end in some form of penetration of the lead female!

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by Anonymous10/13/13

Fun story

Very realistic and down to earth. Many women would like to play a stripper. Most are not bold enough. The few who do it , like Nikki, really enjoy it.

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by Anonymous10/14/13

I love the story. If it took a while to write, I am not surprised. If you are, as your profile tells, a man - congratulations. You got inside the head of this woman, because I found myself imagining myself as the lead character. Highly erotic tale, but not a bit vulgar. It was wonderful.

I'd love to read whatever you decide to write next.

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by Anonymous10/15/13

Very well done!

Believable, well written, Thoroughly enjoyable!

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by BeccaHasFun10/15/13

I loved it

I know a really good story when I imagine myself as the protagonist. This story made me really want to be there and be that girl. And God, I'm so wet right now... great job!

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by Anonymous10/19/13

great fun

the whole idea .. very sexy ... what a turn on ... MORE ~ ! .... Gypsy ... mmmmhmmm.... I loved this story. Thank you.

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by Diannah10/20/13

4 stars

A great tease! I would love to see a follow-up story! Keep up the great writing!

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by ManofMithgar11/08/13

Great job

A superb description of the mind of a lady playing GRL.

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by Anonymous12/21/13

very entertaining

I have read all of the stories submitted by this author, and must say that I have never been more captivated by the story waiting in anticipation of what would happen next. The author has a way of building the story up so that you keep wondering what could this person do to make things even more "spicy". I have marked this person as a favorite,which I haven't done before, and look forward to any new submissions from them.

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by Anonymous05/23/16

Fantastic!

Very well done!

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by Anonymous07/18/16

Was entertained and had a real good time

Excellent story. 'Gypsy' is one of my favorite musicals, and while people tend to praise whoever is cast in the role of Mama Rose, there is a reason the show isn't called 'Rose'. It is Louise's story just as much as it is Rose's.

Having Nikki's journey towards becoming comfortable and confident in her sexuality as a parallel to the character she played was very well handled. Also having her become witty and playful just like the real Gypsy Rose Lee was also very well written, especially the adlibs.

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