All Comments on 'My Beach Boy'

"...can I have him all the way, just for a moment, please, pretty please”

That was special. How could he refuse?

Stimulating stories like My Beach Boy are all very plausible; just ask any hedonist. An erotic massage delivered by a talented masseur can arouse the sexual expectations of everyone present. As a certified massage therapist, I've given sensuous massages to hundreds of clients, assuring me of good recommendations and repeat business. I'm retired now, but I still give erotic massages to everyone who requests them. I no longer charge for the sessions, so that I can continue to perfect my sexual massage techniques on a wide range of body types. This arousing story by AlanaAllyn almost makes me want to massage everyone I meet to see what develops. This couple really knows how to write stimulating erotica, and I look forward to seeing more of their massage submissions on this web site soon.

So I only rated it 3***s.

Writing mechanics are terrible. Most homonym choices were wrong, grammar is off, (oh, yeah...'off' is 'of'). Add bad flow and it becomes awkward / uncomfortable to read. Made a Balinese Beach Boy happy! (Pun intended!)

3* (but might vote 2 - if I could stand re-reading it!)

1) I thought Alynn was the female until that got clarified.

2) When did the masseur (Made ... what a strange name) get naked so his cock tip could penetrate her?

That was one really great example of a really poorly written bad story.