I have a new fantasy to try out! I loved the story, though there are some small problems with the premise that keep it from being totally believable. The use of dialogue, and the POV of the wife, however are very easy to comprehend, and believe that her fantasy was being realized.
The use of attire as a main source of the tease is also a good way to arouse interest. Please keep writing!
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Anonymous10/15/13
Just doesn't happen.
Seriously? Ok...well if you got away from the idea women say "cunt" you'd be a lot better off.
I agree that this is not a realistic scenario, but the comment about women not saying "cunt" is silly...my wife says it all the time, especially during sex.
Nice story. There are some words that I use very rarely but are very appropriate for certain times and activities and that time and activity is one of them.
English
Pretty darn hawt!
I have a new fantasy to try out! I loved the story, though there are some small problems with the premise that keep it from being totally believable. The use of dialogue, and the POV of the wife, however are very easy to comprehend, and believe that her fantasy was being realized.
The use of attire as a main source of the tease is also a good way to arouse interest. Please keep writing!
Just doesn't happen.
Seriously? Ok...well if you got away from the idea women say "cunt" you'd be a lot better off.
Very enjoyable.
Yes, actually they do...
I agree that this is not a realistic scenario, but the comment about women not saying "cunt" is silly...my wife says it all the time, especially during sex.
Yes they do
Nice story. There are some words that I use very rarely but are very appropriate for certain times and activities and that time and activity is one of them.
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