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In the valley

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by LesseloovesPeter10/12/13

Wrote this Thursday night...

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by Oldbear6310/13/13

Do you realize

That you paint pictures, visual and emotional, very clear pictures? Yes you do. And you just combined two of my favorite things

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by Cleardaynow01/18/14

Sends shivers through me

This caught my eye on the Random list of poems. Not sure how I missed seeing it at the time - or missed seeing it properly. Perhaps I missed that day or I was tired and blind.

This is so lovely. The direct picture of being in the late afternoon with someone prior to going indoors.

And the subtext.

Breaks your heart.

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