Why do some writers constantly feel the urge to turn these stories into a complete fuckfest with tons of people involved? Just leave this between two people, that's much more erotic than some shitty gangbang.
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Anonymous10/17/13
great
I couldn't sit down and read it all at once it had me horny for two days great story keep up the good work
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Anonymous10/18/13
Wow
That was so hot! It made me dripping wet before I could even finish it! Reminds me of how my brother and I got started... wasn't too long before I got pregnant. Three kids and 9 years together later I never reget it!
Why would boys be making 'short' jokes about a girl who's 5'5?
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Anonymous10/22/13
I like it
Want more want more
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Anonymous10/23/13
amazing
I loved that story. It made me so horny. Keep up the good work
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Anonymous10/23/13
No daddy
It was an amazing read, but i think it would be better if the brother and sister continued a romantic relationship instead of the sister fucking her dad.
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Anonymous12/08/13
great story
Man I thought I would never stop cumming we I finsh jerking to this stiry btw any one want to send me naked pics of them selves my number is 2567770963 girls only btw
What kind of dumbass posts their phone number online. Anywhere.?! Folks will be posting your number up in the mens restrooms at gay bars now fool. "For a good blowjob call me! Oh, I like unprotected rough sex in my hairy ass too!" Rofl. ...and what girl on the internet would send you pictures of themselves to some random stranger who apparently can't even spell?
...anyway, loved the story so far...... MORE IMPORTANTLY....
Super Huge Kudos to the Author! Someone FINALLY wrote the male character in an incest story who wasn't a big whiny pussy whipped conflicted loser pretending how its soooOo wrong and all the sucky tired plot-line shit that usually goes along with that. FINALLY a REAL guy that is only worried about getting caught and knocking her up. THANK YOU :) :)
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Anonymous05/06/14
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As I was reading this story i started getting wet and finally to a break go finger myself
A deliciously well written chronicle! It's all in the details you use to describe the engaging characters personalities that makes this story so riveting! It's only sHort coming... is that it's too short... which is a good thing. Please continue this one as well! **
....just reread the story, its been a while! Still fucking awesome... And...gawd I WANT a little sister!!! ;). (Or two, or three;). I think what kills me the most is knowing that there are girls that are reading the SaMe stories that I am, getting just as horny as me, and wishing We could get together and role-play different story ideas together...mmmmmm.... (Shame the wife doesn't get off on that:/ )
English
Your story is very HOT & arousing ! Please continue with more chapters to see what happens next. Thank you.
Good so far
Leave daddy out of it
What Skyhawk said.
Why do some writers constantly feel the urge to turn these stories into a complete fuckfest with tons of people involved? Just leave this between two people, that's much more erotic than some shitty gangbang.
great
I couldn't sit down and read it all at once it had me horny for two days great story keep up the good work
Wow
That was so hot! It made me dripping wet before I could even finish it! Reminds me of how my brother and I got started... wasn't too long before I got pregnant. Three kids and 9 years together later I never reget it!
Loved it
That was so hot! I added right to my favorites!
'Little' Ashley
Why would boys be making 'short' jokes about a girl who's 5'5?
I like it
Want more want more
amazing
I loved that story. It made me so horny. Keep up the good work
No daddy
It was an amazing read, but i think it would be better if the brother and sister continued a romantic relationship instead of the sister fucking her dad.
great story
Man I thought I would never stop cumming we I finsh jerking to this stiry btw any one want to send me naked pics of them selves my number is 2567770963 girls only btw
this made me so wet and horny
What kind of dumbass posts their phone number online. Anywhere.?! Folks will be posting your number up in the mens restrooms at gay bars now fool. "For a good blowjob call me! Oh, I like unprotected rough sex in my hairy ass too!" Rofl. ...and what girl on the internet would send you pictures of themselves to some random stranger who apparently can't even spell?
...anyway, loved the story so far...... MORE IMPORTANTLY....
Super Huge Kudos to the Author! Someone FINALLY wrote the male character in an incest story who wasn't a big whiny pussy whipped conflicted loser pretending how its soooOo wrong and all the sucky tired plot-line shit that usually goes along with that. FINALLY a REAL guy that is only worried about getting caught and knocking her up. THANK YOU :) :)
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As I was reading this story i started getting wet and finally to a break go finger myself
naughty
great story. well written. very hot. 5 stars.
Bravo!
A deliciously well written chronicle! It's all in the details you use to describe the engaging characters personalities that makes this story so riveting! It's only sHort coming... is that it's too short... which is a good thing. Please continue this one as well! **
....just reread the story, its been a while! Still fucking awesome... And...gawd I WANT a little sister!!! ;). (Or two, or three;). I think what kills me the most is knowing that there are girls that are reading the SaMe stories that I am, getting just as horny as me, and wishing We could get together and role-play different story ideas together...mmmmmm.... (Shame the wife doesn't get off on that:/ )
Nasty
I loved every word. Can't wait to read part 2.
Awesome
Great story, cant wait to read part two.
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