All Comments on 'Grains of Sand'

by LesseloovesPeter

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LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years agoAuthor

My Friday lunch piece, written on the shores of a lake preserve in which I picniced.

todski28todski28over 10 years ago
Almost

The start of a tv soap opera :-p

I like it, besides the teasing

a lot to ponder

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years agoAuthor
hmm...

Point taken, Tod... Maybe should not confess, though not on my mind at the time, said soap is the only one I've ever watched... Back when I was a teen though, many years since.

Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years ago
Nicely said

But a different thought - Sand is powerless to prevent it.

Hope you enjoyed the picnic

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