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by Anonymous

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by LesseloovesPeter10/12/13

My Friday lunch piece, written on the shores of a lake preserve in which I picniced.

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by todski2810/12/13

Almost

The start of a tv soap opera :-p

I like it, besides the teasing

a lot to ponder

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by LesseloovesPeter10/12/13

hmm...

Point taken, Tod... Maybe should not confess, though not on my mind at the time, said soap is the only one I've ever watched... Back when I was a teen though, many years since.

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by Oldbear6310/13/13

Nicely said

But a different thought - Sand is powerless to prevent it.
Hope you enjoyed the picnic

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