All Comments on 'Afternoon'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
lousy ending

don't like the way you ended the story try again and draw it out some more

JimSkyJimSkyover 10 years ago
Ignore that idiot

Nothing more annoying than a whiny, bitchy anonymous commenter. Some stories are short, some stories are long. Nice job!

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassover 10 years ago
Afternoon delight

Getting together with friends is always a pleasant way to spend an afternoon. Sometimes, oral sex makes it even more pleasant.

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