Seduction of Melanie

WTF

What the fuck was this shit? Green eggs and ham, I suppose. Either way, it sucked.

Perfectly blend of innocence and authority

Loved your story! Well written and kept me wet and wanting more ;)

Wow

That was hot! Well written. Please write a follow up. Thanks for the story :)

More!

that was incredibly erotic. please, please write more! I need to know how far and how well it goes!

Well Done!

I have to say, I love this story. It's well written and erotic, and I can't wait for chapter two!

Whoa!

This is really HOT!!!!! More, please! :D

mel

good story,really liked it. cant wait for follow up

Hot

I love this story, please update it with a new chapter!

Please

Please add more... I wish to know what happens next..

Uncle and shy niece

You must keep us readers updated...as you must continue with this story...you made me cum shoot my load ....you gave me a rock hard cock !!!!

Hot taboo story!

It's too bad you haven't written a sequel. I would love to read about Melanie's response to tasting unc's secret sauce directly from its source.

I would love to read the next chapter to this story

Sequel please!

I would love to see more of this story!