It was good and it was dirty but it took too long to get to the hot part. Nobody ate her pussy and she didn't suck anybody off. On a scale of one to ten I would have given it a nine but it rounded down to a four.
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Anonymous08/23/05
great
I rerally like the story. It had good dialogue and kept moving. Give us a sequel.
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Anonymous11/18/05
Well written...need more action
It was one of the most well written stories I have read on this site, it used so much wordplay, it was great in that area. But the action seemed slow in areas, almost stilited. There is a difference between building up to a climax and always climbing and never reaching
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Anonymous07/10/06
So filling
I was right there with her just filled in both holes.
I love big black ones.And so enjoy it when all holes are filled
if that was my wife I'd say get out, as for my brother I'd brack his balls . I have know problem with it if she'd had told me but to find out like that and that my kin new about it and that he was her pimp , sorry but no way
wow that would be my wish come true....awesome story
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Anonymous10/12/10
Good one
Yes it was hot and DIRTY, but that's what a gang bang should be - dirty. This is not making love - that's for some romantic fools - fucking is for horny people simply enjoying a screw. She obviously enjoyed the black cocks (as most married white wives do) and so she should because blacks fucking white wives is the ultimate and all husbands should encourage it. How about two dick in her cunt at the same time. That would be great and then another can enter her ass while she blows one guy (all blacks). That would constitute a real gangbang.
English
Good and Dirty
It was good and it was dirty but it took too long to get to the hot part. Nobody ate her pussy and she didn't suck anybody off. On a scale of one to ten I would have given it a nine but it rounded down to a four.
great
I rerally like the story. It had good dialogue and kept moving. Give us a sequel.
Well written...need more action
It was one of the most well written stories I have read on this site, it used so much wordplay, it was great in that area. But the action seemed slow in areas, almost stilited. There is a difference between building up to a climax and always climbing and never reaching
So filling
I was right there with her just filled in both holes.
I love big black ones.And so enjoy it when all holes are filled
Great!
Love it. very good, nice twist
Great Job Sir!
Great story, great twist, and very well written.
dump the slut
if that was my wife I'd say get out, as for my brother I'd brack his balls . I have know problem with it if she'd had told me but to find out like that and that my kin new about it and that he was her pimp , sorry but no way
my wish
wow that would be my wish come true....awesome story
Good one
Yes it was hot and DIRTY, but that's what a gang bang should be - dirty. This is not making love - that's for some romantic fools - fucking is for horny people simply enjoying a screw. She obviously enjoyed the black cocks (as most married white wives do) and so she should because blacks fucking white wives is the ultimate and all husbands should encourage it. How about two dick in her cunt at the same time. That would be great and then another can enter her ass while she blows one guy (all blacks). That would constitute a real gangbang.
Yuck.
SICK......SICK.......SICK. Go to Hell.
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