All Comments on 'Mindful Seduction'

by todski28

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Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years ago
Wow

You could write the book!

QueenelizabethQueenelizabethover 10 years ago
Sweet

Wonderful visual, indeed each part interconnected when played like a beautiful instrument.

theoncomingstormtheoncomingstormover 10 years ago

You paint a beautiful picture with your words, drawing upon all the senses. This is my favorite of yours thus far.

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago
This is...

fantastically erotic. I was left breathless. Please excuse me while I go touch myself.

todski28todski28over 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks you all

For the comments, it mus if read well if the spelling and grimmer mistakes were missed :-D

To old bear would love to write the book, but have only been writing for 4 and a half months

MatryoshkaMatryoshkaalmost 10 years ago
Vivid Imagery

The picture you paint is crystal clear. The parry and thrust of seduction offered and and accepted. I could feel my cheeks heating, along with other things. Awesome...

Being one who loves tactile exploration this whole thing resonated with me.

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