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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/18/13

How the hell did that happen

I gave this idiotic piece of trash one star and it scored four?

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by tazz31710/18/13

A GENTLEMAN NEVER TELLS

at least the whole truth. TK U MLJ

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by Lickideesplit10/18/13

Sorry, ANON 'how the hell'

The way that works is that I gave it an 11* rating!

Seriously, pretty sure intromission does NOT happen whilst falling together! Other than that, it was a cute addition to your 'flash' repertoire!

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by IronDragon10/18/13

Made me LOL

The sense of humor in this one was priceless! Great flash tale.

5 HUGE Stars!

Now, back to work.

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by rjordan10/18/13

How the hell did that happen

There's a lesson for you. If you want to continue 1-bombing stories you shouldn't have read in the first place, you need to give it 4 stars. That way it will record 1 star. Try it next time. Or just keep your vote to yourself.

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by rjordan10/18/13

Fun story

A really fun little vignette. The British slang only makes it better.

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by x_witless_x10/18/13

"expecting to find a nice little limp." is not, rj, British slang..

Slapping her? Not cool. Gripping her by the nape of the neck I would like Not a riot of laughs really 3*

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by Anonymous10/18/13

x_dickless_x

What a fucking moron.

You don't have a fucking clue about anything, so shut the fuck up!

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by betrayedbylove10/19/13

It Must Be Me

I didn't care for it very much. Sounded like a script for a bad porno. I didn't rate it however because it had potential.

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by Vulcan_in_Ohio10/19/13

Preposterous but funny

Four stars, pretty original and well-written. Rogering, sounds like fun.

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by bruce2210/19/13

Surprise, Surprise

A very enjoyable piece. Thanks.

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by Anonymous10/24/13

5*****

Thanks. tom anon

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