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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/19/13

Great start!!

Very erotic. Can't wait for chapter 2.

Five stars

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by Anonymous10/31/13

More, please

No remedial English required. That alone sets it apart from so many of what is on literotica.
Not only that but also, in a story of less than 3500 words, you've included all the necessary ingredients and produced a tale that is enjoyable to read.
Yup, I do so enjoy your writing. Keep it up.

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