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still waiting
for a story because you have not told one yet just total foolishness. You could do me a favor and stop writing and i feel bad using the word writing when commenting on your garbage.
Huh?
@Anon 'still waiting'. Gee...there are authors whose works I do NOT read because I do not find them pleasurable.
I did kinda like this flash 'expansion' (the first Ashson Ch2?) but I find it MUCH less interesting that most of the rest of this author's clever work! Just nothing particularly 'clever' about it! Best I can say is 'Adequate but uninspiring!'
You could write a book:
"How to make a bad story...worse!"
Better
I liked this more than the first one. Hopefully Kelly's slide into a submissive women will keep getting better. 4*
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