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Restoring the Castle Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by countrygirlfla10/23/13

Very good,,

well written,good grammar,and an interesting new plot,,,,looking forward to chapter 2..

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by fanfare07/30/15

An impressive start

olivas, I am glad that I will be able to read this story straight thru. I find the dramatic stories, with a complexity of characters, actions and plot-arcs, a lot more comprehensible that way. That is why I no longer post stories by chapter.

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