All Comments on 'The Lust of A Wolf Ch. 02'

This is starting out good! I'm itching for the next chapter.

You certainly have my attention. Great story and I hope you will post the next chapter soon.

MORE!!

Looking forward to new chapters!

Its very good and can't wait to read more. I suggest that your. Chapters be longer though.

Has the makings of an excellent story. I, like others, would love to see longer chapters. Totally hoping your muse visits more often. Also understand life gets in the way.

Thank you guys. Positive feedback is such a good feeling. It's kind of hard to make longer chapters when the train of thought (on the characters part) ends at that point. And I apologize if it is in anyway boring. I hope that in the next chapter, which I will hopefully write soon (have to get in that creative mood), will tie up some ends. I am not quite sure what is going to happen yet, but I don't want to be predictable. I do enjoy constructive criticism, but the kind comments raise my spirits.

~Darksider1029

Needs to be longer.

While I'd appreciate longer too, I think this chapter was really well-done. It was packed with action and emotions and rich details like that of the room and Ian (sounds hot!!) and the fight was well done too. I hope you update somewhat soon b/c it is on the short side but I will look in to see if an update happens at some point.

Well done short,PAGE,,,not a chapter,,would be nice if it could be 2 or 3 pages,i know that it takes alot of writing to make more than one page,and have to get creative,just need to find you a muse,,,hope you dont stop writing because your not inspired,,,

Great story but could you please show is where the charaters swap, it can be a little confusing

WRITE MORE , THE CHAPTERS ARE TO SMALL DUM, STORY IS GREAT BUT NOT ENOUGH

PLEASE TAKE YOUR TIME AND GIVE ME MORE...

Can't wait for another hope its longer

I am dying to see where this story is going! I do hope that you will be posting soon! and I hoping that there will be lots more to come, lots more! :) I will be watching for more! :)

I love the chapters!! Can't wait to read more of it. : ) Cliffhangers drive me crazy.

Story is too short and Elle needs to put up a fight more, make her more fisty or something

This story deserves to be completed. Please try not to alienate your readers by making the wait so long between updates, it really breaks the flow of the story. Perhaps the best strategy would be to finish the whole story before posting it... This story is so good that it gets frustrating not to have closure... Your writing is very good, and if you updated more frequently, you could be considered one of the better writers on this site!

I agree tht I feel her character should be more feisty n alil rebellious , n stand her ground n not give in so easily. Cz I have heard alot of werewolve stories where the females dnt fight much. Maybe can say run off frm thrre a few times.

Enjoy paranormal

Very much ? Surely there is more to come. I did enjoy this story what there was of it!

I keep rereading this story hoping that there's another chapter but there never is! This is a great story and you should definitely add more chapters! I wanna know what happens next!!!!! So PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!

I am really liking this series but both parts were too short and you haven't continued writing the story. I am very disappointed not to have more to read it's like an author releasing the fist couple of pages of a book and gets people interested and then not releasing the book and leaves us hanging. Not cool