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Perfect Imperfections

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by Anonymous

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by Oldbear6310/16/13

Very nice

Sweet. Nice writing, Storm

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by LesseloovesPeter10/16/13

a rare

connection you have made.

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by Queenelizabeth10/19/13

Very nice

'I wish you could see yourself through my eyes
It is a stunning view'

A Simply beautiful line

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