would have loved to hear that the bastard that tried to bust a marriage was castrated, and fed to the fishes, otherwise he'll bust someone else's marriage.
not with details and minutia, but with gaps and questions. Each reader will create their own image. only a well written story sets the stage for this to happen.
English
Short but....
Short but to the point.
Nice Twist
Was sure that she was his wife!
Short and sweet
Nice twist to the story.
Good story, as usual...
Good story, as usual, almost always with a twist...
loved it
would have loved to hear that the bastard that tried to bust a marriage was castrated, and fed to the fishes, otherwise he'll bust someone else's marriage.
Inspirational
You do the flash thing so well! Latein, early out and a lovely twist in the tale.
5*
yes
yes
Great
Great
Yeah
A preemptive strike, to save the daughter from trouble. That's what fathers are for.
Excellent
I agree, a father will always be more lenient & protective of a daughter than a wife; blood to blood. 5 *****
we are given the frame
and get to fill in the picture ourselves.
not with details and minutia, but with gaps and questions. Each reader will create their own image. only a well written story sets the stage for this to happen.
Every wife is someone's daughter.
THE OLD ADAGE ABOUT A SON AND DAUGHTER
and the compare--contrast about wife and life. TK U MLJ LV NV
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