I didn't understand your use of ya'll, which refers to more than one person. It made it confusing.
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Anonymous10/22/13
Y'all
As a southern girl myself, I understood the use of the word y'all perfectly. Although I don't talk like that, I do know quite a few people who do. Anyway, nice story. I hope there is more to come.
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Anonymous10/22/13
y'all
True southerners know that "y'all" is a singular pronoun. Its plural is "all y'all."
ya'll
I didn't understand your use of ya'll, which refers to more than one person. It made it confusing.
Y'all
As a southern girl myself, I understood the use of the word y'all perfectly. Although I don't talk like that, I do know quite a few people who do. Anyway, nice story. I hope there is more to come.
y'all
True southerners know that "y'all" is a singular pronoun. Its plural is "all y'all."
All?
"Y'all" is funny. So are "all y'all." And BJ's story is quite good, too!
wow
You done it again as expected. Such a great story.
just fab
story is very good just hope you can keep the rest is as good it flowes realy well lets see if the sequel is as hot yours leann hugs & kiisses
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