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Your Wish Is My Command

byDirt Man©
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by Anonymous

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by noirdom9202/18/04

Good story

The story was written with a very good flair.

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by Anonymous01/06/06

excellent

Wonder if she knew who was fucking her. Great story, great ending.

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by Bazzz10/21/07

Excellent imagination

A very good story. Your imagination is great. I would get an editor though. Some sorts of your story are a bit confusing as it seems you rushed through to get it on here. Still I am going to read your other interracially themed stories as this one was very original.

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by Anonymous05/07/10

Your vs You're

You're is a contraction for "you are." Your is a possessive way of expressing ownership. "You're the best, baby." "Whose is it?" "Yours!"

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