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by Anonymous

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by WifeWatchman10/27/13

Interesting

I like writing detective stories myself, and I'm looking forward to more of yours.

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by mojorisin196710/28/13

Male suspect?

Wifey suspects you being a man, because of your attitude to doubt a rape because of the woman having an orgasm. There are force orgasms, too.

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by soflabbwlvr10/28/13

Good story

I enjoyed this one until the last few paragraphs. The ending felt a little flat, although I honestly can't say how I would have improved it. The best part, for me, was the rushed interlude after the interview. It wasn't NonCon or Reluctance; it was just hot. There's nothing I like more than a woman who knows what she wants and isn't afraid to get it. Almost as good was the whole drawn out explanation from the "victim." Overall, this was a very good story, I just wished it ended on a stronger note.

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