All Comments on 'The Mentor'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
good

Good story but a little too fast. Drag it out a little more. But otherwise, over all, good job! Keep writing!

tim4522tim4522almost 10 years ago
A WONDERFUL Love story! Okay, a Little Short but ..

.. But it was so endearing! I loved how they grew together and enjoyed each other. VERY sexxxy mmmmm.

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love to play. I enjoy writing the stories and I appreciate constructive feedback and comments from you.