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by mel_pomene10/27/13

This is well-written but ...

... it seems more like an outline than a story, a synopsis. Are you intending to expand on this theme or is that all there is? Either way, are you sure that Literotica is an appropriate place to publish work of this kind - I am not.

Thank you, welcome to Literotica and please show us more of your work, but try to remember what it is we do here.

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