I must admit this is the first story of this genre I've read and I really ejoyed it. I think it would have been better if the girl had met him back in the lobby, but what do I know? Keep writing.
not sure that was ur intention, but it was more an evil, ironic laugh with you rather than at u so please understand i did enjoy the story. the erotic side was bit meh but maybe coz its only a 2page piece of writing. keep it up :)
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GOOD STORY
I must admit this is the first story of this genre I've read and I really ejoyed it. I think it would have been better if the girl had met him back in the lobby, but what do I know? Keep writing.
gave me a laugh
not sure that was ur intention, but it was more an evil, ironic laugh with you rather than at u so please understand i did enjoy the story. the erotic side was bit meh but maybe coz its only a 2page piece of writing. keep it up :)
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